The pie chart illustrates the information of graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer. It shows the average of electricity in england .
It can be seen that the very high demand for electricity in england his winter season. It is use for the electricity of england in winter season. It is use the 35,000 average of electricity in england for his winter season. It is a low demand for electricity in his summer . It is a 18,000 average use the electricity in his summer.
Electricity is used for tge heating rooms and make the heating water . It can be use the 52.5% in the heating rooms and heating water. And 17.5% use the ovens, kettels and washing machines . And a equal using the lighting , tv and radio . It is use the 15% electricity . It is use equal electricity in vacuum cleaner, food mixer and electronic tools .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lectricity of england in winter season. It is use the 35,000 average of electricit...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...icity in england for his winter season. It is a low demand for electricity in his ...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...low demand for electricity in his summer . It is a 18,000 average use the electric...
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Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... demand for electricity in his summer . It is a 18,000 average use the electricity...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d for electricity in his summer . It is a 18,000 average use the electricity in h...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...heating rooms and make the heating water . It can be use the 52.5% in the heating ...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...17.5% use the ovens, kettels and washing machines . And a equal using the lightin...
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Line 2, column 190, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the ovens, kettels and washing machines . And a equal using the lighting , tv and...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ns, kettels and washing machines . And a equal using the lighting , tv and radio...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...achines . And a equal using the lighting , tv and radio . It is use the 15% electr...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... equal using the lighting , tv and radio . It is use the 15% electricity . It is u...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd radio . It is use the 15% electricity . It is use equal electricity in vacuum c...
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Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cleaner, food mixer and electronic tools .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 9.0 33.7804878049 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 556.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48387096774 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61401065165 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 54.0 106.607317073 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435483870968 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 180.9 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3520666496 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.5454545455 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.2727272727 22.9334400587 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 5.23603664747 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278633011335 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150144845232 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120470172847 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227673616135 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148566007396 0.0819641961636 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 13.2329268293 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.52 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.