The pie chart on number of consultations doctors had in 2005
The above pie-chart represents the USA’s annual number of consultations, which patients had with doctors belonging to various specialities in 2005. Primarily, six specialities have dominated in terms of volume in contrast to remaining ones.
At a first glance, General and family medicine dominates closing on about one fourth of the populace ,followed by the internal medicine and paediatrics which, only differ by a value of four. These three specializations combinedly were the most sought off clinics than the rest.
Secondly, Obstetric and gynaecology and opthalmology preceed the surgical fields with a near similar percentage above six each, meanwhile orthopaedic surgery secured the last spot . All others combinedly totalled at a number, slightely above a quarter in terms of percent .
To summarise, Medical ailments have caused nearly forty of the population to seek advise. Children had some thirteen percen necessity meanwhile, each of the surgical guidance was particularly needed for less than a tenth of the visitors
The above bar chart illustrates the percentage of visits to the physician by the people of USA, hailing from all age groups in the year 1995 versus 2005. In an ascending order, from youngest to the oldest have been compared in terms of frequency of visits.
Evidently, adults have frequented the mostly comprising young and middle aged with a range between 20 to 30 percent. Initially, the former group had approached a clinician more often which, reduced by a value of six in 10 years. With the beginning of a new millenia, there was a rise in the number of bookings by the people in their fifties.
Clearly, Adolescents were a healthy bunch with the least requirement for a check-up on both the occasions although, children still constitute the third highest ,despite showing a modest improvement. Lastly, elderly visited roughly the same on either of these time periods, although there was a reciprocal relation between below and above seventy five year age groups.
To Wrap it up, overall appointments of all ages stayed the same, with variations only specific to it’s any individual party.
- Business Processing Outsourcing is changing the worlds culture Discuss both views and state your view 56
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 73
- The government has announced that it plans to build a new university Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university Compare the advantages and disadvantages of a new university in your community 56
- Some people feel that once they go overseas they have to follow the new culture and forget about their traditional culture State your view 84
- Global warming and the effect it has on the universe 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sing on about one fourth of the populace ,followed by the internal medicine and pa...
^^
Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rthopaedic surgery secured the last spot . All others combinedly totalled at a nu...
^^
Line 6, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tely above a quarter in terms of percent . To summarise, Medical ailments have ca...
^^
Line 26, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a clinician more often which, reduced by a value of six in 10 years. With the beg...
^^
Line 27, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ldren still constitute the third highest ,despite showing a modest improvement. La...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, third, while, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 33.7804878049 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 965.302439024 194% => OK
No of words: 341.0 196.424390244 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49853372434 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86860910946 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 106.607317073 201% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627565982405 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 283.868780488 197% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4001752539 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148737287956 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459982008887 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101184394607 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634408155773 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921036821729 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 40.7170731707 273% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.