the pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The first pie graph illustrates the total percentage of revenue sources, while the second pie graph shows the percentage of expenses of a certain children charity in USA in year 2016.
It is clear that the highest source of donation came from donated food and mostly the charity spent on their Program Services.
To start with, the highest supply for the charity came as donated food which was more than 86% of the total earning, while one-tenth of the revenue sources came from community contributions. The remaining 3% account was managed through program revenue, investment income, government grants and other income.
On the contrary, they spent almost 96% in their program services and only a small percentage accounted for fundraising and management and general at 2.6% and 1.6% respectively. The charity earned exactly $53,561,580 this year and used up $53,224,896.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, while, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24285714286 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65272289837 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.572417371 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.23603664747 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178881597175 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789481728414 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710306845465 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105413205282 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702984238492 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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