The pie chart shows the popularity of different takeaways food in the UK
Diagram 1
The pie chart illustrates the favorite meals people buy in restaurants or shops to eat at home in the UK - or we can call it “Takeaways”.
At first glance, it is clear that almost the Chinese takeaways in particular and Asian takeaways, in general, account for a large proportion which is shown in the chart.
According to the chart, with the amount of nearly 64%, Asian takeaways are definitely the best choice for British people because not only they could be cheap and taste good but also for the people who are busy at work, which include 34% like to eat Chinese takeaways, Indian ranked second with 26%. On the other hand, some people enjoy eating Europe ones with 10% of people choosing Italian takeaways. Furthermore, British takeaways still accounted for a significant proportion with 9%. The others are Thai with 3%; Mexican, Japanese and Greek takeaways are equal with the proportion of 1%. Moreover, some people order different food or they don’t know where the food comes from accounting for 4%. In the fact that takeaways make the earth become more polluted, or could be they have time to make their own meal by themselves, so 11% of people choose not to order takeaways.
Overall, the British people seem to like buying takeaways with a really high proportion which can be seen clearly on the pie chart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, in general, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81739130435 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56508758017 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4817045958 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.111111111 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 5.23603664747 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192453096086 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896786645448 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617252082143 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140709715186 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458910607069 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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