The given pie chart reveals the information about the usage of water in residential, agriculture and industries in three areas, San Diego, California and worldwide. The data is calibrated in percentages.
The most striking feature to be observed here is that maximum water is used in the household works in all the three given areas. For San Diego residential area hold the highest consumption of water with 60 percent followed by industries and agriculture with consumption of 23 and 17 percent. In California residential, industries and agriculture were accounted for the consumption of water with 39 percent, 33 percent and 28 percent respectively.
Turning to rest of the description, the rest of the world also portrayed with maximum consumption of water at residential area with 69 percent followed by agriculture with 23 percent of water consumption and industries stood at lowest with 8 percent only. As far as comparison is concerned through all over the world water consumed more at residential area and least use of water was at industries. Moreover, residential area use three fold more water than agriculture at world level. What is more, San Diego use almost two fold more water in industries as compared to rest of the world.
To encapsulate, more water is consumed at household chores at world level rather than industrial area which produce more output for world.
- Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this What are the advantageous and disadvantageous of solar energy 79
- Some people believe that it is impossible to help everyone in need around the world That is why government should only focus on their own countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Explain 77
- Some people think that children should have some classes outside their school, visiting local companies or public enterprises for some real life experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree.Give your opinion. 78
- Learning English at schools is often seen as more important than learning local languages If these are not taught may are at risk of dying out In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English Should we try to ensure the survival of local lang 82
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world. 31
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...riculture and industries in three areas, San Diego, California and worldwide. The...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e data is calibrated in percentages. The most striking feature to be observed he...
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.315573770492 0.268076937826 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.135245901639 0.116061578633 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0737704918033 0.0759168565197 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0409836065574 0.0366838410393 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.180327868852 0.155750635184 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0532786885246 0.0379272487307 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00408281847 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016393442623 0.0210936926555 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0614754098361 0.0948980150116 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00819672131148 0.00967000014798 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1387.0 1161.00487805 119% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.9 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16444444444 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73763899035 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.324444444444 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275555555556 0.247514529752 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213333333333 0.171178102325 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173333333333 0.112407865282 154% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00408281847 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457777777778 0.546246751206 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.189112764 49.3433353143 81% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2760536517 42.9750493124 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.7 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 50.0555555556 47.7609492067 105% => OK
Elegance: 3.11627906977 2.94281807926 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468165827633 0.418131533498 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.275611965963 0.181151798455 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.138965394632 0.0850326197045 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.687484035739 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17011684758 0.157042692854 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242193397042 0.228904883108 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133046853748 0.108899403657 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.433462910091 0.367819155151 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.079054825233 0.0812612215331 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331247760047 0.316326947829 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176763998013 0.0921553760075 192% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.08536585366 196% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 3.02926829268 264% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.