A glance at the chart provided reveals the water usage for residential, industry and agriculture in San Diego country, California and another widespread world. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that using water for the residential purpose was higher in San Diego and California except for another whole world.
Looking at the details, firstly in San Diego country, just 60 percent of people used water for the residential necessity which was a bit popular than the industry which used 23 percent. Next agriculture 17 percent making it least popular. Likewise in California people opted to residential with 39 percent as opposed to the industry with 33 percent while agriculture with 28 percent is less popular. Subsequently, in another part of world agriculture is three times as popular than the industry with around 69 and 23 percent, respectively. However, the residential share is in last on the list with 8 percent which was the least used.
- The table below shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondaryschool types between 2000 and 2009. 73
- These days young children spend a lot of time using computers tablets and smart phones Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial others believe that they would benefit more from playing traditional games D 93
- The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, Californiaand the rest of the world. 73
- Some people think the government should support the funds for the arts, while some other people suggest that the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- The chart below, shows the amount of money per spent on fast foods in britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...bit popular than the industry which used 23 percent. Next agriculture 17 percent ...
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Suggestion: Likewise,
...ure 17 percent making it least popular. Likewise in California people opted to residenti...
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Suggestion: as
...d agriculture is three times as popular than the industry with around 69 and 23 perc...
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Suggestion:
...ith 8 percent which was the least used.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, likewise, look, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10191082803 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78654958954 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.95465098 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143798506011 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788660651504 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955585818361 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152430557595 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105006981724 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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