The three pie charts illustrate the percentage of expenditure on different types of goods, compare the population and consumption of goods by areas on the world.
In the first chart, four kinds of merchandise paid most are food, transport, housing, clothing in the order highest to the lowest expense. Approximately one-fourth of the money is paid for food. Following is transport with 18 percent. People spend 6% of the spending on clothing while twice as much this money is used for housing.
In the second chart, the most significant proportion of the population is recorded in Asia, at 57%. The population in Europe and America are relatively comparable, at 14%, which is 4% higher than the figure in Africa. However, in the third chart, American and European consume 60% of the total amount of merchandise of the world.
Overall, the spending varies on various types of goods, concentrating on Food and although Asia’s population is the biggest, the USA and Europe‘s residents consume the most crucial amount of goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13017751479 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8412473547 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585798816568 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2027410796 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134199295985 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517767364961 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451822215728 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855925694042 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458963165239 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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