The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts provide an information about the change of world population in last century. Units are measured in billions.
Overall, comparing with both pie charts it can be seen that more than half of the total population lived in asia at 1900 and 2000.
According to the pie charts, about 60% people lived in asia and one-quarter of total people lived in europe in 1900. However, after 100 years in 2000, population of africa and latin america & caribbean was risen over the period. In 1900, only 4% people lived in africa and about 10% people lived in africa in 2000. Same trend was seen in latin america. Total proportion of people in north america and other region in the world was remain same over the period.
Over the 100 years, total population in world aslo changed significantly in 1900 around 1.6 billion people lived in earth and it increased 4.4 billions in 2000.
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Some people choose to eat no fish or meat. They believe that this is not better for your own health but also benefits the world as whole.Discuss these view and give your own opinion. 56
- Each year the crime rate increases What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity 78
- The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76129032258 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32504162123 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535483870968 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1533862434 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200910922265 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873442502644 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816858544386 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146878965407 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583218175295 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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