Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Crime has been increased in alarming rate. Everyday lots of crime has happened all over the world. World leaders are very much concern for increasing the rate of crime. They always take several steps to reduce this problem. However, there are various reason behind the increasing of crime rate. In this essay, I will discuss some causes of crime and some possible solution.
First of all, crime rate has been risen some developing countries and less developing countries. Many people are drug addicted in poor and developing countries. Drug and alcohol are not cheap. They occurred many criminal activity for collecting money. For example, everyday happen hijacking and maximum hijacking are occurred by drug addicted young generation for money to take drug. They even occurred murder for drug.
Secondly, poverty is the another reason of rising crime rate. Many people are unemployed in developing and less developing countries. For instance, many african countries people lead their life under poverty level. Those countries crime rate are very high. Worse social condition and low mentality is the other causes of crime.
General people and government try to reduce the crime rate and government takes some steps to control the crime rate. They build drug rehabilitation center and they want to remove drug from society. In addition, They create many job opportunity for the young people. Furthermore, police are very much conscious about reducing the crime rate in some countries.
In conclusion, drug and poverty are the main causes of increasing of crime rate. People awareness and government steps are very much important to reduce this problem. By providing job and raise living standards government can reduce this problem.
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...blem. By providing job and raise living standards government can reduce this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32246376812 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48013267307 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474637681159 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1738223361 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2083333333 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 19.0 3.9879759519 476% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18732633485 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676533961111 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502185990647 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120404498315 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401974539573 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.39 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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