Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
crime is the biggest evil of our society. Over the last one decade the crime rate in our country has increased substantially. In this essay, we are going to discuss various causes for crime and the measures to prevent criminal activities.
criminal activities are majorly performed due to two main reasons. Fistly, the major factor is unemployement, in India almost 20% population is unemployed and which eventually provks them to adopt unfair means like theft and extortion to fulfill their daily needs. Moreover, lack of secuirty measures available in the country is also an added incentive for criminals to perform their horrific acts for instance in Gurgaon city it is very difficult to commute after 9pm in night as most of the areas are not adequately illuminated further they are not guarded as well which gives criminals a great platform to execute their horrible task.
various measures which can be taken by goverment to control crime rate are Introduction of special employement programme for people who are living below the poverty line, such as prime minister employement opportunity programme launched by Indian goverment for welfare for destitute people. Furthermore, goverment should also focus on improving the safety measure by providing better infrastructure like proper street lightining, enhancement of security forces, late night patroling by police officials are few of the examples through which crime rate can be reduced. Additionally, the imprisonment timeliness should also be increased for criminals, which will pass on a strong message to these bad evils to put an end to their wrong deeds.
Finally, to conclude crime is very difficult to be erased from our society, however if government can take strict measures against the criminals, it is very much possible that it can be minimized to a greater extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28231292517 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8403397214 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.117602765 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.3 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182396153803 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781759788957 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475186401465 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114602202952 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526597974131 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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