The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

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The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The graphs illustrate the proportion of percentages household expenditures in a country between 1950 and 2010. The percentage of food has risen increase while the housing has dramatically decrease.

In the year of 1950,the housing was the biggest household expenditures 72.1%. Followed by food 11.2% as a second primary spending. Moreover, education in the third place was 6.6%. In addition, health care and transportation less focus of the state in 5.7% which was others expenditures in a 4.4% of the total household.

After the developing 60 years, the expenditures had dramatically changes which was food become the dominant (34%) from the total. The others, transportation, and health care had slightly increase in each sector which were 19.2%, 14%, and 4.5% while the changes increasing was 27.6% in total. The housing had dramatic dropped which was in 1950 the government put a big subsidise in housing but since 2010, housing in not a the biggest category that made housing lower 3 times than before. In education it seems that official not care much about education which was education levelled off year by year.

The pie charts illustrated the dinamis expenditure in 6th decades. Average household expenditures per category was fluctuated while housing plunged and food became the focus.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'decreased'.
Suggestion: decreased
...ease while the housing has dramatically decrease. In the year of 1950,the housing ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...portation, and health care had slightly increase in each sector which were 19.2%, 14%, a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 419, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
... housing but since 2010, housing in not a the biggest category that made housing lowe...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, second, third, while, in addition, in the third place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32850241546 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89754410862 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4702510261 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9166666667 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206988146223 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914596950743 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106346361501 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166505494943 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822838534733 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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