The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The pie charts below show exports between the US and Vietnam.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The given pie charts illustrates export between 2 distinct countries namely US and Vietnam.
Overall, it can be seen that the most valuable category is aircraft parts which transfer from US to Vietnam . Moreover, categories of freight play a crucial role in each country are utterly distinct.
Similarity, both coffee and aircraft parts that exported by Vietnam and US respectively occupy nearly half of the total.
In Vietnam, the number of bucks from exporting coffee are by far the highest, at 23 million dollars, while the figures for rice and seafood both sharply lower, at 4.3 and 4.4 million dollars respectively. At the same time, fruit and vegetables contribute 16 million dollars in the entire of exports. By contrast, the figures for garments are 2 million dollars. In addition, Vietnam received only 2 million dollars of others good.
In USA, the responses indicate that aircraft parts is the most valuable categories, at 72 million dollars. Especially, the number of money received from exporting cotton is twice as much as exporting cars. The same things is happen between machinery and fertiliser that machinery contribute higher bucks to the total of all categories. Remarkably, total of money from others merchandise provide more than all categories except airplane crafts.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
Suggestion: happened
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29126213592 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74100848124 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9049304063 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130569972601 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542066577407 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754597500126 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104399341523 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089600545493 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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