The pie charts below show hiw employment is divided in Tanzania and Ireland.
The pie charts compares the relative importance of dissimilar types of employment in two very different countries.
It is noticeable that the proportion of chart employment in Tanzania divided into four and in Ireland divided in five jobs. In Tanzania agriculture employees by far the most people. Nearlyfour out of five (70%) work in this sector, whereas only two percent of Irish people are in agriculture. In Ireland, the largest employer is the service sector, where over 70% of the population work. In Tanzania, the figure is only 14.2%, despite the fact that Tanzania has a significant tourist trade, and this is included in the services figure.
Although manufacturing is quite significant in Ireland, employing over a fifth (21.5%) of the population, not many people are employed in this sector in Tanzania. Other industries are not very significant in either country. Construction, for example,is less than 5% in Ireland, but is even less important in Tanzania, with only a very small number of (0.6%) employed in this industry. There is also some employment in the energy and water industries in Ireland. However, this not mentioned in the Tanzania data
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15873015873 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90724251016 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7801602169 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328321358907 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125299765578 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982039701841 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213466164004 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339540105438 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.