The given pie charts compare the proportions of water consumed for different tasks in 6 areas of the world.
Overall, it is clear that water is the most widely-used for agriculture proposes in the world, except in North America and Europe, which used mainly for industrial purposes. The least among of the three is domestic use.
In agriculture use sector, the most significant amounts of water usage is allocated to Central Asia (more than three-quarters of the total water consumption of its area), followed by Africa, which accounts for 84%, South East Asia (81%) and South America also comprises a considerable proportion (71%). However, that of North America and Europe are much smaller (39% and 32%, respectively).
In industrial use sector, the water usage trend is completely reversed. Europe and North America are responsible for the highest shares of industrial water consumption, as former with 53%, while that of the latter is marginally lower (48%). There is no substantial difference between the figures in South East Asia and South America (12% and 10%).
In domestic use sector, South America is the highest among other areas (19%), whereas Central Asia and South East Asia share the same proportion of water consumed (7%).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1592039801 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70527849204 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542288557214 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1853778854 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.222222222 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185754286893 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915719102157 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800632919333 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136487258745 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795509196237 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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