The pie charts illustrate the cost of living's comparison between the great Britain and America.
The pie charts illustrate the cost of living's comparison between the great Britain and America.
Overall, people in the UK spend more for rent than other categories. By contrast, spending on food account for the largest proportions of living cost in the US.
The percentage of spending on rent in the UK and America is 30% and 20% respectively. Meanwhile, there are 25% of expenses in the US and 18% of cost in the UK are spend on food. Only 12% of the cost of living in the UK is spend on books and the figure for America is 15%.
Both American and British spend 10% of there living cost for DVDs. While people in the UK spend 15% of their expenditures on going out, just like people in the US. Finally, the proportion of total expenses spending on transport in the great Britain and America is the same with 15%.
- the charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age group and the amount of support that receive from employers. 67
- the table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004 67
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The pie charts illustrate the cost of living's comparison between the great Britain and America. 61
- Governments should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...in the US and 18% of cost in the UK are spend on food. Only 12% of the cost of living...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... 12% of the cost of living in the UK is spend on books and the figure for America is ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
... the UK spend 15% of their expenditures on going out, just like people in the US. Finall...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4701986755 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46764955559 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476821192053 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8700576851 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305354146955 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188282872441 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.278727258266 0.0843802449381 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31135816068 0.15604864568 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.34886347283 0.0819641961636 426% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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