The pie charts show the size of classes in primary school in 4 states of Australia in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart give information about the distribution of students across various classes in four states of Australia, namely Australia capital Territory, Western Australia New South Wales, and South Australia.
In terms of classes in primary schools, the states under consideration show varying class sizes, yet the optimal range of 21-25 students is predominately adopted by educational institutions within the ACT region for maximum efficacy. Evidently, classes with a student count exceeding 30 exhibit the lowest representation in the data.
Look at the pie chart in four states in 2010, it can be seen that the classes in primary from Australia Capital Territory ( ATC) of 21-25 students is highest among four states about 51%, providing sum of classes in primary schools assistance. Although, the student ( 26-20) is has a significantly decrease about 10%. Meanwhile, the classes of more than 30 students in four states have the low data and last for one year between 1%-5%. The other two classes in primary school is under 20 students and 26-20 students below 40% about 28% ( ATC), 30% ( Western) , 26% ( New South Wales) and 35% ( South America)
Look at the pie chart in classes in 2010 of last three states, the South America has a significant increased and highest among four states ( 53%) and Western Australia is highest second after South about 42%. During the following quarter, New South is lowest among four areas about 37%. So, it can be seen that the classes in primary schools ( 21-25) students tempt many young children than other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... classes in primary schools assistance. Although, the student 26-20 is has a significan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0753968254 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5935059028 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519841269841 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 363.6 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.0650199847 43.030603864 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.111111111 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226119721463 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995231645273 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823275551722 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159712519087 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359929946032 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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