The pie graphs below graph show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate
The given charts show the comparison between male and female children in terms of recreational and physical activities preferring by them.
On the whole, both genders are likely to listen to music. Furthermore, the percentage of boys who enjoy skateboarding is also true with that of girls in doing workouts.
In detail, computer games emerged as the most enjoyable activity among boys, stood at 34%, and this is followed by basketball with 26% of boys participated. The least preferred sport is soccer which accounted for 17%, while the figure for skateboarding is the lowest in terms of outdoor activities, with only 11% enjoy to play. On the contrary, a mere 2% of the boys took interest in reading.
Take a closer look at the second chart, it is easy to see that dancing is the most prevalent activity with 27% of girls participating in it. Unlike the boys, 21% of girls showed their interest in reading, made it the second preferred activity. There is 11% of girls enjoy doing gymnastics, this is followed by netball and an indoor activity which is computer games, stood at 15% and 16% correspondingly
- Internet technology means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- The pie graphs below graph show the result of a survey of children s activities The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate 78
- The bar chart shows the percentage of the small medium large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, second, so, while, on the contrary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75132275132 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78441635551 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 189.0 22.4926829268 840% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 898.0 112.824112599 796% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 189.0 22.9334400587 824% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 73.0 5.23603664747 1394% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237602608642 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237602608642 0.103423049105 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139953525796 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743233823405 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 95.4 13.2329268293 721% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -111.9 61.2550243902 -183% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 75.8 10.3012195122 736% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.02 8.06136585366 199% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.4329268293 516% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 77.6 10.9970731707 706% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 11.0658536585 533% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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