The plans below show the layout of a university s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment

Essay topics:

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment.

The several maps depict the present and future building plans of university sports centre.
Overall,It is apparently seen that, the gym, the changing room, seating and reception around the pool.They will be remain same after some evolution.
Looking into detail, the changing room facility on the west side of the pool. It will be divided in two parts more on the west and east side of the sports centre.Furthermorr,after some enlargement the cafe and sports shop will be constructed on the east and west side respectively just behind the reception.
Jumping into remain data,It is noticeable that, the outdoor courts which are on the west side of university sports centre.They will turn into leisure pool after some spreading of space.Apart from this, another expansion of sports centre will be teo dance studios and one sports hall will construct on the area of east side outdoor court.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, look, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1095890411 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91114423262 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.6548498525 43.030603864 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.2 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205740528943 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110654508115 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518807818198 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127439436828 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458868901884 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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