The maps illustrate the design in the sports centre of university before and after reconstruction.
It can be clearly seen that both outdoor courts will be dismantled as well as the sports centre will expand more westerly and easterly. Overall, the present facilities will save for further development.
As for the current design, it is a reception at the entrance as well as there is a changing room on the left-hand door and user is available to get in the 25 meters swimming pool via the door inside the changing room. Seating post on the right-hand door as well as Gym room places on the north of the building. As far as outdoor courts, which set on both sides of the centre.
In future designs, the indoor building will expand instead of the outdoor courts. Sports shop and cafe would open after entering the entrance and turn left or right. The amount of changing room would be triple, in addition to the original, the others will plan on the corner next to the sports shop and cafe, independently. The leisure pool is possible for swimming in the future and it will establish on the west, sports hall will be added next to the seating. Lastly, two rooms of dance studio set up on the east and the size of the Gym room will be bigger than its original design.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 78
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... both outdoor courts will be dismantled as well as the sports centre will expand more west...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ers will plan on the corner next to the sports shop and cafe, independently. The leisu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, well, as for, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56768558952 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43625859132 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519650655022 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7821428559 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0909090909 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121457003483 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533115957566 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482415559971 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924515492132 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586671571909 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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