The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates the steps to make the dough for a pizza.
Overall, there are 7 steps to make the dough from putting ingredients into a stand mixer to cutting into 3 pieces.
First of all, to make the dough, you need to add 5 ingredients to the stand mixer, which include 4 cups of flour, one and a half cups of water, 2 teaspoons of salt, and a half teaspoon of dry active yeast. Secondly, put the mixer into the blender and mix them for 2 minutes on the slow mode. Thirdly, start the medium mode in 5 minutes. After that, return to the slow mode and continue to mix for the last 2 minutes. In addition, we will let rise the dough at least 2 hours, which will help the dough increases the size by double. Furthermore, using hands to work the dough to remove all the air bubbles inside of it. Finally, before completing, the dough will be cut into 3 pieces or 275 grams each dough.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, second, secondly, third, thirdly, at least, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24117647059 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28111700921 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5340082756 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1111111111 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8888888889 5.23603664747 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160840217663 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740161720722 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076283514727 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160056399669 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832048761233 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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