In some countries, the number of shootings increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that the rate of shootings in several countries has increased significantly nowadays because owners have too many guns on their hands. In my opinion, I totally agree with this idea and there are some reasons to improve this view.
First of all, many nations are allow households to own private guns, which is very dangerous for children because they do not know how to handle these guns correctly. For example, in the USA, many children have been dead when they accidentally play with guns. This leads to the number of people injured by guns. Moreover, many guns shops still do not focus on checking do they have old enough to purchase guns. Therefore, many teenagers begin to buy guns and they might have some horrible consequences if they use guns to commit a crime. In addition, owners can become especially dangerous when they get frustrated and then use guns as solutions to opponents is inevitable. For instance, In the United States, 75% of shooting cases have been caused by people who can not control their feeling when having bad conservations or using alcohol and even drugs. Furthermore, some countries permit people to own guns as private, but governments are facing a major problem that criminals rates are threatening society because they use guns to crime which results in the number of shootings rise higher and is hard to measure.
In conclusion, there is undeniable evidence that having a gun in a house starts further shootings. I believe these nations will soon have strict laws about owned guns
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91153846154 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55267292328 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1167321842 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.416666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278748946168 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107875082755 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621867760822 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190020552758 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720532402305 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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