The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The process below shows how to make dough for a pizza.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the procedure for preparation of pizza dough using flour.

Overall, the process includes seven steps which mainly consists of mixing. The ingredients required for dough are 4 cups of flour which equals to 500 grams, one and half cup water, 2 table spoon salt and half table spoon dry active yeast. All these ingredients should be added in a stand mixer and mixed slowly for 2 minutes. To ensure proper blending of substances, it should again be mixed at medium speed for 5 minutes and then for 2 minutes at slow speed.

Following the proper mixing of ingredients, the finished dough should be kept to attain maximum size within two hours. After the dough size has increased, the dough should be kneaded with hand to ensure the removal of air bubbles for smooth surface. The final phase is to cut the dough into three equal pieces of 275 grams each.

Thus it is evident that preparation of pizza dough is a simple process and doesn't require much efforts.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...hree equal pieces of 275 grams each. Thus it is evident that preparation of pizza...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... of pizza dough is a simple process and doesnt require much efforts.
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... is a simple process and doesnt require much efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77192982456 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35179348469 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9136645896 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147540039333 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664730202058 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351904687782 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10282602697 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196066153941 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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