Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about which progress is important to a country. Some enunciate the idea that economic growth is the ultimate goal of every government, I agree with the idea that other measures of progress, including happiness and environmental sustainability, are as crucial.
On the one hand, boosting economy is obviously a vital aim that all countries wish to achieve. Firstly, a healthy economy is the prerequisite for the government to enhance life quality, for they have money to upgrade public facilities and provide better public services. For instance, only when the economy creates enough profit and then contributes to state budget via tax can the medical service can be provided free of charge to all citizens, thus ensuring better health. Secondly, a strong economy also increases the status of a nation on the global stage. In other words, a prosperous country will have political influences on others, demonstrated by the power of America now.
On the other hand, I would argue that there are other equally significant factors that should be taken into consideration. The first measurement is well-being since richness does not always mean happiness and good health. A telling example is Japan, which is also one of giants in the global economy, but citizens often face stress because of excessive workload. The second consideration is the environmental protection because the growth of economy normally goes with the booming of manufacturing plants, the natural resources’ exploitation and the increasing production of waste. Without environmental conservation, severe contamination is inevitable, leading to health deterioration and other more serious consequences.
In conclusion, it is obviously true that the economic development is the key marker of a country’s success, but other criteria, which are well-being and environmental protection, are equally vital.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55326460481 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13757184104 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3607658683 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15505459904 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521259777074 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059860267858 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102884176357 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712323824848 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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