process chart
The process chart illustrates the information of recycling process of aluminum cans. This is the seven step process and there is no major equipment used in this process.
Firstly, from the diagram it can be seen that there is separate dustbin needed to collect used cans, thus it is easy to collect aluminum cans. After then, the collection of cans has been done by trucks and transported to the factory. Furthermore, this cans are first shorted and then cleaned, after cleaning, this cans are passed through in machine where cans are shredded and compressed to make small blocks. In the next step, this cans are passed through heating process, due to heat cans are melted and turned into liquid while, this liquid is collected in one bucket.
Secondly, this liquid aluminum is converted into roll and the thickness of this aluminum is 2.5 mm to 6mm. moreover, from this aluminum roll, cans have been made and it called “recycled cans”. Additionally, these cans are reused for soft drink and labeled it. After them this cans to be sold to public. In UK, 74% aluminum cans are recycled.
Overall, this process is very simple with no big machinery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ness of this aluminum is 2.5 mm to 6mm. moreover, from this aluminum roll, cans have bee...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e reused for soft drink and labeled it. After them this cans to be sold to public. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8578680203 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43924343319 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4093805137 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.75 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160791864065 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838816528158 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158277948132 0.0843802449381 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173286587948 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205615537823 0.0819641961636 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.