Process : Life cycle of the silkworm.
The diagram elucidates the evolving process of the moth. At first glance, it is evident that the evolving of silkworm into the moth is going to take several times which are approximately between 8 and 10 weeks.
To begin with, the eggs are left by the moth in the leaf in order to make it evolving by itself later. Following this, the eggs are going to be crack opened in the next 10 days and change to be silkworm larva. Once the eggs have become a larva, it used to consume the mulberry leaf as their cuisine.
In accordance with the next step, larva will be covered by the silk throad after 6 weeks later, and afterwards, larva is going to change its shape to become cocoon from 3 to 8 days. After it is being cocoon, larva will be fully covered by the silk throad and it will take 16 days to make larva evolving to become moth. after it changed to become moth, it is ready to fly, feed on nectar from flowers and reproduce their next generation, in other words, beginning the life cycle once again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... to make larva evolving to become moth. after it changed to become moth, it is ready ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33862433862 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19114066041 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529100529101 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3219465676 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106388596522 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491201548391 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536938538856 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701659560581 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334589119658 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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