The flowchart illustrates the process of how is the milk prodused.
Overall, the process consist of six steps, from cows grazing to distribution of milk products to the supermarkets and shops.
First of all, cows are being milking by milking machine twice a day after being fed and grazed. Then, milk is stored in the large refrigerators before being taken by milk tanker. After that, milk tanker delivers milk daily to Diary. Further, the Diary produce cheese, butter and cream from the raw milk. On the next stage milk is pasterized, in order to kill microorganisms and to keep product fresh. Then, pasterized milk is packed in the bottles and moves along conveyor to delivery stage. After milk being ready, it it delivered to customers by placing product in the supermarkets and shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...delivery stage. After milk being ready, it it delivered to customers by placing produ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 662.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97744360902 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64161352145 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593984962406 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1555678059 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5555555556 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512766125511 0.215688989381 238% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218164860188 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815963382701 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.349407493503 0.15604864568 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216938908028 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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