The shown diagrams provide information about the production of glass and how it is recycled.
Overall, it is clear from the diagrams that the glass recycling is contains six different steps, whereas production requires only four steps.
It can be seen from the first diagram that firstly, the raw materials of sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed thoroughly , they then send to melting process where it becomes glass furnace. Here it melts around 1500 degree celcious before sending them to shaping process. After shaping through mold it is converted into a glass container and finally, the glass is ready for distribution.
Moving to the second diagram, the recycling process is slightly longer than the previous one but this is a relatively simple process. Initially, all used glasses are collected and then seperated them according to it's colour. In the third stage, all glasses are washed properly in order to remove impurities. Next, all of them are crushed and melted before transferring them into the mould. Lastly, the glass is moulded and manufacture a brand new product for usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, so, then, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16574585635 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58669857925 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1086946855 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16886392993 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689029552398 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469703065585 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11048425733 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534713404074 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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