The production technique of red wine
The diagram gives information about the steps involved in making red wine.
In general, there are ten steps in total, starting with the collection of ripe grapes, and ending with refilling bottles of red wine. It can be seen that the production of red wine is totally by hand.
At the beginning of the process, farmers grow grapes until they are mature enough to produce wine, and they select the standard grapes. After that, grapes are kept in anaerobic conditions at least 14-21 days before being put in the crushing machines. Next, these grapes are put in a pot of ale to ferment with skin. There are two stages, one of which is skin and stems are put in a drainer for pressing to squeeze free run juice, whereas the other one creates juice from the pot ale.
Grapes juice undergoes the process of fermentation without skin again before being filtered and maturated from six to 24 months. Finally, workers put ingredients, such as acid, and sugar to make them tasty, and wine is packed in bottles to sell to retailers or supermarkets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, whereas, at least, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69945355191 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3922820751 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2325606979 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5555555556 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198240775913 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955494213846 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120611849357 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148203569337 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115722043508 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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