the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets
The three pie charts illustrate show information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three different diets (average diet, healthy diet and healthy diet for sport).
Overall, it is able to see that the highest percentage and most negative the healthy diet for sport is proportion of carbohydrates and fat.
In the one hand in the proportion of carbohydrate to average diet is 40% then proportion same is healthy diet and healthy diet for sport is 50%. To protein average diet is 40%, heathy diet is 30%, follow healthy diet for sport is 25%. The next fat to average diet is 20%. it is twin with healthy diet 20% also. At last healthy diet for sport just 15%. In other hand average diet give proportion highest in the carbohydrates and protein is 40% and lowest protein is 20%. Whereupon healthy diet give the proportion more carbohydrates is 50% then protein is 30% and fat is 20%. Meanwhile healthy diet for sport give significant increase to carbohydrate is 60%, protein is 25% and fat is 15%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75706214689 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72289423613 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406779661017 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0341365393 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451429318328 0.215688989381 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22926140714 0.103423049105 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136743698487 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.365724977633 0.15604864568 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1718640541 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.06136585366 78% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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