The table shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table give information about the rate of employees who are women and the position about managers who are women in five countries.
Overall, the women as workforce in Japan’s and United State is highest among five countries tries but woman as a managers is lowest. However, we can see clearly if we look at the specific decline.
Look at the table chart about women as a workforce. It can be seen that, the rate of women in workplace in Japan is highest ( 48%). The second highest after is United State and Australian about 46% and 42% . The proportion in that three countries very high than other countries, the women in these countries can see they try hard on working and has the equality. Finally, in Egypt and Sri Lanka is 41% and 20%. However, Sri LanKa is lowest among five countries.
Look at the table chart about women as a manager in five countries. In this areas, Australian and United States have the same percentage and highest ( 43%). Meanwhile, Egypt and Japan have significantly decreased in there about 12% and 17%. Finally, Sri Lanka still lowest about 9% and decreased more than when from 41% to 9%. So that, women are underrepresented in management roles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a manager' or simply 'managers'?
Suggestion: a manager; managers
...among five countries tries but woman as a managers is lowest. However, we can see clearly ...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f women in workplace in Japan is highest 48%. The second highest after is United ...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d State and Australian about 46% and 42% . The proportion in that three countries ...
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Line 4, column 72, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...omen as a manager in five countries. In this areas, Australian and United States hav...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tes have the same percentage and highest 43%. Meanwhile, Egypt and Japan have sig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, second, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71844660194 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56321054718 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509708737864 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7860255198 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4285714286 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237483077818 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852987430933 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967708265355 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17733761864 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869951823796 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.