Around the world some adults work from home as technology becomes cheaperand more accessible. Technology is an important part of modern life. From my perspective, both happenings are, and I will explain more in this essay.
With today's modern life, technology is consider an important part of life. Most people nowadays we can clearly see that almost anyone is using technology. For example. The current state of corona virus is very The current state of corona virus is very dangerous and we know how dangerous it is because everyone has to work from home. This makes people learn how to use technology in this modern life, even when they do face-to-face learning, they will often be distracted, but because they are outside, they can still absorb the approach. With today's technology can also make them more focused, creating their own corner. For example, you should not wear clothes at home, but keep your mind fresh and dignified as if going to work at the office, so it makes you pay more attention to yourself so that it will be easier for you to meet your partner later. attract others even more.That's my thinking about adults working from home, but for children I think it's still an opportunity for them to get acquainted with technology and almost now I see parents giving their children I used the internet so early I think I don't need to talk much about children's issues anymore.
A strong mentality, some people still have a lot of trouble working from home and using technology. For example, their boss only communicates with employees directly, which will be very detrimental to them. Especially, for children, this disadvantage is also much because when they are young, but they communicate a lot with technology and the internet, it will be problems on social networks because nowadays there are many websites. has bad content and if children click on it, it will affect.
In conclusion, Everything has a good side a bad side but I believe this is also a good development in the future i believe everything will be fine and the use of technology will transform for good people can conveniently work anywhere with technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
With todays modern life, technology is consider an important part of life. Most people ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Attract
...ier for you to meet your partner later. attract others even more.Thats my thinking abo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thats
...partner later. attract others even more.Thats my thinking about adults working from ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...partner later. attract others even more.Thats my thinking about adults working from ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er later. attract others even more.Thats my thinking about adults working from ho...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... I used the internet so early I think I dont need to talk much about childrens issue...
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Suggestion: Has
...cause nowadays there are many websites. has bad content and if children click on it...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s also a good development in the future i believe everything will be fine and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62943010232 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521212121212 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4964749924 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238081791248 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850648632429 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699444032501 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149342914726 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655673808584 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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