A recent survey shows the number of people traveling through London's underground station boarding Victoria Terminal at different times of the day.
The provided line graph delineates the trend of survey of travellers who boards Victoria terminal at various times of the day, while, traveling through London's underground station.
Overall, highest number of people boards Victoria terminal in working hours, firstly in morning when people leaves for job and secondly when they come back from jobs, and least number of people travel in the hours of early morning and late evening.
Now, turning to details approximately 100 people boards at 6:00 AM, the trend then fluctuates whole day and at 22:00 PM in the evening the number of travellers again becomes 100. From 6:00 AM to around 9:00 AM the graph shows upward trend, where the number of travellers climbs upto 400. Moreover, at nearly about 18:00 PM the number of travellers shows descending trend from 400 to 100 people.
In addition to this, In working hours at about 9 o'clock nearly about 400 people travel, which falls suddenly to about 10:00 AM and then the trend fluctuates from 11:00 AM to 17:45 PM being initially and finally at same number of travellers that is 200. Furthermore, after 17:45 PM the trend again jumps to 400 at about 18:35 PM.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
... Londons underground station. Overall, highest number of people boards Victoria termin...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: PM_IN_THE_EVENING[1]
Message: Use simply 'PM'.
Suggestion: PM
... then fluctuates whole day and at 22:00 PM in the evening the number of travellers again becomes ...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...on to this, In working hours at about 9 oclock nearly about 400 people travel, which f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37001642598 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.107446516 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.285714286 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 5.23603664747 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33120153797 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174039486133 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134929506483 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239140712884 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143864977801 0.0819641961636 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.