Recyling of cotton t shirts
The given process illustrates the journey of cotton t-shirts that passes through different stages such as production, consumption, and disposal.
Overall, it is a time-consuming and complex process. The intervention of human is indispensable for the completion of the entire cycle of cotton t-shirts.
To begin with, the cotton is harvested on a large scale and is picked by a cotton picker. Then, it is sent to a place for the conversion into the bales. After that, those bales are transported by lorry to the manufactures for the next stage. Later,
those bales are threaded and weaved into a piece of fabric before getting transformed into a finished product. Since the fabric is colourless, the treatment of colour is a prerequisite before designing. After colouring, the same is pushed
for cutting and sewing. After the transformation to finished products, they are moved towards packaging according to the demand of a seller.
At last, those packages are dispatched to a shop for consumption. The consumers buy those t-shirts as per their choice and wear them. After their usage, they are directed towards disposal in different forms. Although there are
varied ways of disposal, the best way is recycling.
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- Recyling of cotton t shirts 67
- Recyling of cotton t shirts 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22335025381 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97414282146 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58883248731 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.07073170732 560% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5671385069 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146665306833 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045002022097 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756677227455 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659247983268 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694250796022 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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