Smoked food are popular worldwide because of their special flavour and their long life. The diagram below shows the structure of a home smokery and how it is used.
The diagram illustrates the structure and the operation of the home smokery.
Overall, the home contains three main parts, beginning at the chamber for air entering to heating and ending at smoke flows into the final chamber for smoking food.
First, the air from the outside goes into the chamber that lies under the ground. The amount of air enter is controlled by a lid. Then, the air reaches the second chamber through the pipe at the bottom. There is an enclosed chamber with a pile-up of logs. In the second step, the air is heated by a fire and transported to the final chamber.
The third chamber is designed higher than the others and two-thirds of it is above the ground level. Moreover, the inlet of this box is covered by many bricks that help the smoke distribute evenly in the atmosphere. In this stage, the smoke passes through the bricks and reaches the food suspended at the top of the chamber.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he ground level. Moreover, the inlet of this box is covered by many bricks that help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65030674847 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31266373792 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539877300613 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2411228092 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.079619228368 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349434361125 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521262672436 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750829917978 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587458828335 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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