Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people assume that music mainly contributes to their energy replenishment and anxiety reduction. From my perspective, although I compromise that this is the primary function of music, music also plays a crucial role in reinforcing motivation to promote in their life
It is understandable why several people believe that music enables humans to become less stressed and anxious. To begin with, most songs are composed with a harmonious melody and meaningful lyrics in order to assist individuals in alleviating their feelings of tension and apprehension. This is extremely essential to students and employers who face heavy workload and multiple tasks that they must finish to keep up with their peers. Additionally, while commuting to work or driving home, people may get stuck in the congestion which can result in frustration and irritability, so with the assistance of music it will help people to stay calm and enjoyable while driving their vehicles. To meet the needs of many people, some music applications are created to allow people to listen to music regardless of where they are which is also considered as way prevent humans from being stressed and concerned.
However, another beneficial aspect of music that cannot be denied is its ability to boost motivation and foster personal development. Indeed, People will struggle with generating new ideas to make the production more attractive and improve the quality of production together with creating more revenue to the enterprises, so music can be a significant tool to enable individuals to address this issue with uplifting melody of the song. Moreover, people often want to give up when they have to face up to some challenges and find difficulty in overcoming hardship due to the deficiency of motivation, in that circumstance music is considered as the vital key to encounter this issue because will help to minimize tightness and nervousness and provide people with numerous informed solutions to cope with difficulties which can contribute to their later success.
In short, while the fundamental advantage of music is to help people relieve stress and reduce the feeling of anxiety, its contribution to bolster motivation in some aspects of daily life is undeniable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...eduction. From my perspective, although I compromise that this is the primary fun...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me aspects of daily life is undeniable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, in short, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 33.7804878049 192% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 965.302439024 196% => OK
No of words: 358.0 196.424390244 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28491620112 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93236493014 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 106.607317073 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561452513966 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 283.868780488 211% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6966923322 43.030603864 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.2 112.824112599 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171693627001 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821445037682 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058429995456 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124239517319 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441845640296 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 61.2550243902 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 40.7170731707 268% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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