In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
In these days, most countries have undergone several significant developments in all aspect with the invention of numerous contemporary items that are favorable for human’s life. However, together with the advancement of the community, it also results in the decline of lots of animals and plants. From my perspective, this phenomenon is derived from distinctive reasons and can be countered by some appropriate measures.
The decline of animals and plants in some regions is brought about due to the following reasons. The main cause of this phenomenon is human activities, people now are carrying out several proposals of removing several forests which is the natural habitat for wild animal and house of countless a living organism of the kind exemplified by trees, shrubs, herbs and grasses to make room for the construction of some buildings with different purposes. On the other hand, overexploiting wood or hunting for recreational purposes is perhaps one of the reasons leading to the aforementioned issue, some people cut down many trees or destroy some habitat of plants to improve their economic status or ignore the law not to hunt animals in the absence of permission of supreme authorities to keep hunting animals illegally without concerning about consequences which make most animals on the verge of extinction.
There are several measures that can be tackled by the government the reduction in the number of animals and plants. To begin with, the government should preserve the population of animals or plants in wildlife by creating captive breeding and reintroduction programs to help revive endangered species. In addition, the government had better encourage their citizens to partake in some events that is beneficial to animals and plants such as planting trees to improve either ecosystem and natural habitat of animals or handing out flyers to raise awareness of people to protect the existence of animals and plants.
Decreasing population figures for animal and plant species is a critical issue that demands immediate attention and action. It is humanity’s collective responsibility to protect and restore the natural world given the origin of these issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct the existence of animals and plants. Decreasing population figures for animal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36231884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92679858694 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.377221335 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.181818182 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3636363636 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207857947283 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823436515471 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456615706144 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118692423054 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286613313536 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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