In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Nowadays, earning high wages has become a controversial debate. A very few individuals earn such extremely high salaries. This results in some people believe that this is much better for a nation's wealth. However, others think differently, so the government should control the people who earn this amount of money and their incomes also. In my opinion, I agree that such an event is good for many reasons.
On the one hand, some human beings believe that receiving a generous salary could enhance the financial level of a country. It is basically caused by the belief of the more money one can get, the more high taxes could be given. This may lead to a growing economy. For example, a recent survey suggests that %83 of the region's wealth fare is attributed to wealthy citizens. In addition, these taxes contribute to the development of a country's fields such ad, education, healthcare, and to name a few. Consequently, these all earned money develop and maintain the economy.
On the other hand, not all people think the same. Despite all the benefits above, some people believe there must be considerable control of the amount of money that a few individuals receive. This is because they do consider this will increase the gap, which already exists, between the rich and poor people. For instance, it is found that getting an educational degree, or medical care is quite expensive for these people. Therefore, those individuals have reasons behind their belief of ruling the high incomes that are being earned.
In conclusion, while there are a few numbers of persons who get extremely high wages, others think that this is entirely unjustified, and hence, should be controlled both the salaries and the amount people who receive that. In my opinion, these high amounts of money play a vital role in the improvement of the domestic province.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... believe that this is much better for a nations wealth. However, others think different...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... this amount of money and their incomes also. In my opinion, I agree that such an ev...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'regions'' or 'region's'?
Suggestion: regions'; region's
... recent survey suggests that %83 of the regions wealth fare is attributed to wealthy ci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of persons who get extremely high wages, others think that this is entirely unjus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97106109325 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59810655478 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 106.607317073 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56270096463 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 283.868780488 172% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3454342577 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445312852049 0.215688989381 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117371229335 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960505056538 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261227349631 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10242357907 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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