The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows different ways enquiries were received by the Tourist Information Office and the figures recorded for each for a duration of six months in 2011. Overall, the numbers start at a similar level but delivery by letter or email declines while via telephone and in person increases.
In January, enquires by phone calls were the most popular with almost 1000 calls received while in person enquiry was less than a half of it and written ones was 800.The number remained in a similar position although there were slight fluctuations between February and March.
In April, in person enquiries rose to just above 1200 and continued to rise at a rate of about 200 per month while telephone enquiry remained steady in March and April and by May it had grown by 400 and also grew by 200 by June. On the other hand, written request lost popularity and dipped to under 400 in May and remained constant throughout June too.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...n a half of it and written ones was 800.The number remained in a similar position a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74691358025 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39363741536 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641975308642 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.6535591418 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.8 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 5.23603664747 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153684030617 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808309656118 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945314173228 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105828056152 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779059051402 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.