Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In this modern era, electronic devices have become increasingly controversial. Some young children spend many hours on their high technology mobiles daily. This is due to the highly marketing for this field these days, parents are less strict than before as well. However, this developed technology phones are positive and negative in the same gome.
On the one hand, nowadays, the technology is dominant in our lives and the way they are marketing is being developed day by day, in addition, parents now are less stringment with their children in term of using smartphones. This is because thay are busy in working more so that they pay less attention on their kids. Also, the companies of these devices are trying to make smartphones the best alternative that could be used to control child’s behavior like crying and they high energy for playing. For example, most of the outdoors activities that were played in the past are now available on application with attractive features that would attract child’s attention.
On the other hand, eventhough this aforementioned issue, those high technology devices are considered a positive or negative developmet depending on how to use them. Regarding the positive way, electronic devices are a great tool to learn new skills and languages. For instance, doulingo is an application for learing languages which is now used in more than 100 countries over the world. However, such devices are a double-edge sword, so they could be addictive if people spent more than the average time on. To illustrate, a recent study shows that %15 of children under the age of 18 are now facing addiction problems due to the smartphones.
In conlcusion, several children now are spending more time on their smart mobile phones every day. This essay discussed why this is happening, and what if this development is a positive or negative one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s dominant in our lives and the way they are marketing is being developed day by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09385113269 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75895994012 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566343042071 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0590061699 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.933333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315402230819 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109506818232 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101943380906 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235595298619 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146837345811 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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