Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, many individuals that are struggling with health problems seek substitute medications and remedy insteade of going to their doctor. In my opinion, this is a negative development which can lead to many problems such as suffering from allergies, and other serious health problems that may lead to death.
A growing number of people prefer to search for alternative medicines without taking their doctor’s opinion into consideration. This is due to the fact that there are some people who are afraid of doctors. As a result, this could cause them to purchase such medications that may contain ingredients which they are allergic to. For example, a significant percentage of humans develop allergy to specific type of medicine like peniciline without knowing that, hence, when they try to buy drugs randomely, they might hurt themselves more.
Moreover, another issue is that those people, especially these days with the developed technology, they might search online for other treatmemts. This is because that they are busy and maybe do not have the time to visit a doctor. The problem is that the information on the internet is not reliable most of the time and there are many misconceptions. Therefore, if they search using google for instance, they could find many opinions that are not correct and consistent with their illnesses, this can be resulting in serious problems that would also lead to death,
In conclusion, although many human beings tend to not visit a doctor and instead they find other remedies and medicines as a substitute, it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14552238806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74968102 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9671373472 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294400260916 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11494839879 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680817133322 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177268365358 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329890844562 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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