Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
It is said that many people support alternative medicines and treatments instead of prescription ones. I believe this development is positive to some extent.
On the one hand it is understandable why alternative medicines are supported by people. With the introduction of new technologies, such as the internet, individuals have become more health-conscious and search online for information about different diseases and treatments. This trend can be seen as positive, as many people learn how to maintain their health. They are taught about home remedies and herbal treatments, which can be safer and cheaper than chemical medicines.
However, we must consider that traditional and alternative treatments are not applicable to all diseases. Due to a lack of medical knowledge, people may endanger their health by failing to understand the underlying causes of their illnesses. For example, COVID-19 can start with symptoms resembling a simple cold. If individuals rely solely on home remedies and herbal treatments, they risk allowing the virus to infect their lungs, potentially becoming victims of this fatal disease. Additionally, most people are unaware of the correct dosages they should use. Overuse of alternative medicines can lead to drug poisoning.
I believe that using alternative medicines can be beneficial as long as they are used under the supervision of doctors. The advantages of prescription medications should not be underestimated, as they can safeguard people's health against many dangerous diseases that alternative treatments may not effectively address.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68487394958 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22263429445 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605042016807 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9912444907 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228548157479 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841884626983 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522446319507 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163096726715 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634145187526 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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