Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years, the use of alternative medicines and therapies as a replacement of conventional treatments has become increasingly prevalent. This trend has both positive and negative aspects to consider and I believe the combination of the two approaches is the best solution.
On the positive side, alternative treatments bring certain long-term benefits. Most of them may have fewer side effects compared to conventional medications and treatments. In fact, some anecdotal evidence suggests that some herbal drinks and medicine such as ginger tea are typically effective in treating some flu symptoms, beneficial for those who are sensitive to pharmaceutical drugs. Additionally, alternative medicine often considers the whole person - mind, body, and spirit - rather than just focusing on specific symptoms or diseases. This holistic perspective can lead to a more comprehensive understanding of health and wellness, encouraging healthier lifestyle and more balanced diet, which in turn increases well-being and life fulfillment.
On the negative side, there exist some potential risks associated with this approach. Firstly, some individuals may choose alternative therapies over conventional medicine for acute medical problems such as accidental injury, potentially leading to more severe situations due to delays in effective treatment. In Vietnam, there have been such cases that patients have had to amputate their injured legs or arms because they chose to use herbal remedies instead of seeking immediate medical treatment. Another possible negative aspect is the disruption of doctor-patient relationships. Patients who pursue alternative methods may become skeptical of conventional healthcare providers, potentially damaging the trust and communication essential for effective medical care. This worsens the existing health conditions and in some cases, threatens patients’ lives.
In conclusion, while alternative methods can limit some adverse effects and raise individuals’ health awareness, the improper application of these therapies can result in severe health consequences. I believe the best option is to use alternative treatments to support and complement conventional medicine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08626198083 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22932831259 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613418530351 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4059368986 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191958309711 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679094723383 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335480258434 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121348598115 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280543417162 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.04 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.