Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Marketing and promotion is so influence that this commercial activities is used in every field.So, increasingly, companies misuse this strategy in order to their assistance, therefore they created unacceptable and unethical’s product. Recently, this methods happens more and more. Everyone need to keep out of harm’s way, so i’m strongly agree with this view.
Most of companies be looking for their advertising campaign and they invested a lot of money for this, using it to exaggerating the real quality of their product. More over, even they can make a advertising broadcasting in order to compromise, ruin their competitors reputation. For example, in halloween 2013, pepsi updated a image with a message : “wish you a scary Halloween”. However, what’s extraordinary is this image appeared by coca - pepsi’s competitor aim at coca is horrible thing. Additionally, the product amplify problem could be affects so many consumers because they buy this product impulsively. For instance, many skincare products in common market who are unknown origin. If anybody uses it, they will allergic. It’s one of the threat which can impact on your skin and your health
Another advantage of unethical’s commercial practises is detrimental impact on teenagers such as their behavior in the future. We must surely sort this out because it can be serious problem. In our society, phone computor or ipad - which using internet, social media increasingly common in children. So, manufactures come up with bad adverts can easily influence children cause by appealing- attractive content, like some unhealthy food have the image of princess or heros on it. These adverts aim at teenager is unacceptable
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| 2022-03-14 | Vương Thu Hằng | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 5.60731707317 553% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44150943396 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02083062876 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 106.607317073 168% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675471698113 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.9411962443 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213673051054 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637449124788 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424416811189 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144383910321 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559107158916 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 40.7170731707 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.