Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, a section of society thought that allowing to teenagers about their basic needs, they choose things according to their requirement is created impact on future, they will become a selfish member of society, while other argue that, these things choose by self gives him confidence.
On the one hand, people thought that if children start to take their decision independently then they care about their needs not those people who are with them in line. Children areuse to with a special kind of food and dresses in early years of life, in future they are not able to sacrifice for others because from start of his life, he is got those things which he like. A study shows that if people have habit from their childhood, then they will never change in their future.
On the other hand, people have arguments that these are personal things and children have full freedom to select it because if a children start to think about their basic needs then his confidence will improve in the future. Food, their looks and the way how they entertain them self are those habit which goes through the life. If children choose these habits by self then his life drive on his way, otherwise it goes on that person's way who imposed these habits on children.
In my opinion, teenagers have option to select their choices without any outer interference however they have some limitation. Means that does not effect on other children.
In conclusion, children, how select their basic needs freely, they will be more selfish while it is their life, and they are able to do anything with basic choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ve full freedom to select it because if a children start to think about their basic needs ...
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Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this habit' or 'those habits'?
Suggestion: this habit; those habits
...he way how they entertain them self are those habit which goes through the life. If childre...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ve some limitation. Means that does not effect on other children. In conclusion, ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 276.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21673998202 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8865691928 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.6 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224496300905 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106693884948 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475311472765 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130946306272 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415273313534 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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