Some people believe that great difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial. Do you think the advantages of greater difference in age between them outweigh the disadvantages?
Some people hold the opinion that age difference among parents and children is beneficial, while I agree greater difference of age has many pitfalls.
Firstly, well age difference create respectable environment between parents and children that is very essential for every child to respect their parents, while some people do not believe on it. Moreover, most significant thing was found that, nowadays days, at the age of retirement so many parents are deliberately doing work for their children on account of age difference. Whereas, mostly parents are enjoying life with their offspring who has less age difference.
Whereas, some adults on the stage of student life start working to get some money for financial support and take care of aged parents that eventually effects on their study and futures, as well as they hold so many big responsibility at early age and would grabbed by so many diseases on their mature age namely, Blood pressure, Sugar, stress and others. On these cases, offspring do not share their feelings and issues with them and mostly parents are unable to support their child on retired period, either it’s physical or financial.
On the other hand, it’s quite difficult to look after children at the period of retirement, and on the same time offspring requires proper attention from parents, meanwhile some students is trapped by those people who brings them into bad environment by the virtue of stress, pressure and inadequacy of knowledge.
In conclusion, greater age difference would effect on both future lives thus people should consider on it's both consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: grab
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...onclusion, greater age difference would effect on both future lives thus people should...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould consider on its both consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27413127413 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66027368824 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 283.868780488 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4048264151 43.030603864 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.75 112.824112599 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349231700439 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170467124591 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115044543336 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211894314907 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123070364355 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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