Life is full of experience and vicissitudes and this is us to choose be an adventurer or accept the probable problems of a failure. Therefore, people may accept a failure or use it as an experience to strengthen their abilities to solve probable future challenges.
On the one hand, advocates of the idea of accepting bad situation may say that people should enjoy the journey and extra efforts to solve the problems or finding new ways may be risky. This means that if trying new ways worsen the situation and spoil the future of a person, it is better to accept the problem and do no action. Furthermore, they point out that people should let time solve the difficulty because new opportunities may be created in the future for them. For example, if a clerk works for a low salary in a company, leaving the job for finding better income may put h/she at a risk of missing the job without finding any new work position. Therefore, it is better to evaluate all aspects of leaving a job and then try to change the situation.
On the other hand, opponents of trying to change the bad situations may consider the mortality of life at the first stage, and believe that life is short enough to accept failures. Furthermore, they think that without trying a new experience or any promotion in life after a failure, human beings become psychologically ill, meaning they need intrinsically to be more active and create new opportunities in life. Therefore, if this instinctive feeling is suspended, they may lose their motivation, but they extremely need it to continue their life normally. Also, human beings are ambitious creatures and always think about better living condition and high quality life. Therefore, forcing thoughts and passions in order to avoid having any risk may cause frustration. For example, in a such high technological world, if everybody accept the failures, the society will miss its mobility and the terms of advancement and progress will disappear for ever.
To conclude, I tend to side with the opponents of accepting bad situation because human beings’ life need to be more excited and beneficial enough to let them dare trying new ways on the seek of their ambitions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to be'
Suggestion: to be
...d vicissitudes and this is us to choose be an adventurer or accept the probable pr...
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Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pportunities in life. Therefore, if this instinctive feeling is suspended, they m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 1.00243902439 1496% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 965.302439024 190% => OK
No of words: 375.0 196.424390244 191% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77210742136 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 106.607317073 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 283.868780488 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5288579679 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15393406315 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605839296024 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457023615212 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981847833917 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200290979596 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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