It is true that, in this contemporary era, situations are being got the worst day by day at an unprecedented rate in all over the world. However, number of masses introspect that it is a good to accept a critical conditions like, less money or unsatisfactory job. Whereas, others contemplate that it is superior way to endeavour and ameliorate such situations and I am totally agreed with this Statement.
To commence with, we should keep focusing on our goals whatever we want to do in our life and it does not matter in which condition we are living. For example, christiano Ronaldo was born in poor family and he was not able to eat proper food that is why he used to do job as a sweeper for money but right now he is a wealthy person because of his hardwork and dedication. Last but not least, good job should be found by people for improving their standard. Moreover, people would have to acquire new skills for achieving something great in their life.
Looking at the other view, there are overabundance of situation which should be accepted by us. First and foremost, inflation rate and unemployment rate are being increased nowadays. Furthermore, finding new job is also not an easy task that is why people are having to do unsatisfactory job because if they leave their job so they would have to confront some problems until they get new job like, bills, grocery item in their home. Another reason could be, there are some conditions like, untimely death and serious illness which cannot be stopped by us so it is better to accept this conditions. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that more than 52% people in India are facing problem due to lack of employment and inflation.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly there are plenty of situations which may be accepted by sizeable majority of individuals yet, we must understand that we should always give our 100% and show our curiosity towards to achieve something new or doing our situations better.
- Some people think that hard work helps in achieving Financial success while others think it is not the only thing which contributes to financial success Discuss both the views and give your opinion 67
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 84
- Some people say that sports play an important role in society Others however think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people think public libraries is necessary however others beleive that the public library is useless Dicuss both views and give your opinion 67
- With the development of technology children are now living in a world that is completely different to what it was 50 years ago What problems do this cause for society and the family 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, whereas, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 7.0 371% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 346.0 196.424390244 176% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75433526012 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74009322148 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 106.607317073 189% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580924855491 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 283.868780488 182% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0686091906 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198260059639 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688021460613 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049368182997 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119877594193 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464979735442 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 40.7170731707 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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