Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Unquestionably, every individual who gain the glorious in every field -business, government, private sector, etc- is the professional, credible, and reputable person. Due to that fact, in order to have successful characteristics, everybody has to begin from the hard work. The state-of-the-art worldwide knows Bill Gates as a businessman or philanthropist, Nelson Mandela as a leader, and Cristiano Ronaldo as an athlete who get their victory started from the diligent and always struggle in every condition and situation for a long time. They also learn from their mistakes and trying to solve every problem and never do they stop it until their duties or occupations are really over. They are very busy and only have a short time to sleep, so, no wonder if they are becoming the role model in the world.
However, praying is not be left behind in every single activity, particularly for people who believe the God, because He listens and understands what humankind want to be. Besides, praying is the warning to people in order to always on the track and when they gain the top position, they always will be grateful and never will they be an arrogant character. Even though being the richest man, Bill Gates always cares for poverty, environment, and education as well as Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best football player, has been paying the humanity attention. Their attitude is the form of gratitude.
In conclusion, hard work and praying are the success key answer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...becoming the role model in the world. However, praying is not be left behind i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, really, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04081632653 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8585594156 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3258241162 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0902157708972 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044614397212 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577691626311 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858535568222 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485528323264 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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