Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Persistence is a process believed society to achieve the success. I acknowledge this statement,but, in my opinion, praying is a part of mandatory to reach the goal.
Unquestionably, every individual who gain the glorious in every field -business, government, private sector, etc- is the professional, credible, and reputable person. Due to that fact, in order to have successful characteristics, everybody has to begin from the hard work. The state-of-the-art worldwide knows Bill Gates as a businessman or philanthropist, Nelson Mandela as a leader, and Cristiano Ronaldo as an athlete who get their victory started from the diligent and always struggle in every condition and situation for a long time. They also learn from their mistakes and trying to solve every problem and never do they stop it until their duties or occupations are really over. They are very busy and only have a short time to sleep, so, no wonder if they are becoming the role model in the world.
However, praying is not be left behind in every single activity, particularly for people who believe the God, because He listens and understands what humankind want to be. Besides, praying is the warning to people in order to always on the track and when they gain the top position, they always will be grateful and never will they be an arrogant character. Even though being the richest man, Bill Gates always cares for poverty, environment, and education as well as Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best football player, has been paying the humanity attention. Their attitude is the form of gratitude.
In conclusion, hard work and praying are the success key answer.
- Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion. 78
- Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion. 78
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- Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion. 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06985294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92988411249 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9966379173 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108658549792 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487685416153 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553354981516 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867870407055 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420790603705 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.