Some people believe that university students should be required to
attend classes. Others believe that going to classes should be
optional for students. Which point of view do you agree with? Use
specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
University is a suitable option for many people to be professional in a field and use their knowledge for future job. Some people believe that attending to class is mandatory while other think it should be optional. In my idea going to class has to be obligatory. I will explain my opinion in the following.
The goal of going to university is to use their knowledge from university in our future job. As far as I know, attending to workplace is mandatory. University is the first step of preparation for our future jobs. In other word, attending in class help us to have discipline and being on time in our future jobs.
A plenty of knowledge will be achieved after arguments and discussions that happens in class. Students who don’t attend in class, have to find out the solutions of all questions which come to their minds. You not only may don’t know those answers but also finding them is really time consuming.
Finally, attending in classes is the best opportunity to meet new people or maybe your best friends. For example, during my bachelor program, I met some of students and after a while we were very close to each other. Since then, we still are friend and keep their relationships. We have been helping each other in our hardship conditions.
In summary, I think attending in classes have to be mandatory in order to prepare ourselves for discipline and rules of our future works. Likewise, the discussions of class are really important to comprehension of concepts. Furthermore, we get to chance to meet new people who can be our best friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to their minds. You not only may don’t know those answers but also finding them...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the students') or simply say ''some students''.
Suggestion: some of the students; some students
...mple, during my bachelor program, I met some of students and after a while we were very close to...
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Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... each other in our hardship conditions. In summary, I think attending in classes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, likewise, may, really, so, still, then, while, as to, for example, i think, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74943503069 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520146520147 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 283.868780488 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8060190127 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7222222222 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355816657207 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106984060665 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830446674663 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198665201547 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992157288002 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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